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Addicted V2 by JNetRocks Addicted V2 by JNetRocks
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Addicted V1: [link]

Okay. So. Addicted is one of my most favorited pieces and I went back and looked at it and you now it kinda looked like crap. The colors were very faded out and back then I guess I was stupid with layers cause I drew the image itself right on the background, which is just bad imo. D: So i decided to go back and clean it up. Erased the background and got rid of the big black bars, changed the big magic ball to little prettier magic spots and added a lot more highlighting in her hair/face area. Also added a backglow and changed the colors because it looked REALLY washed out. :) Hope everyone enjoys ADDICTED V2!! RAWR
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Critique by ShuffleStar Jun 27, 2009, 4:07:10 PM
Almost everything about this picture is great :] Her pose is very dynamic. I think it works well with the great anatomy of the character :] the light coming from the sparkles really does add dimension to the picture, and overall it is a very nice piece. Although, if I may make some suggestions, I hope you take them to heart.

The hips are rather disproportionate; if she were to stand up, I think her bottom half would look like it was at a fun house. The "shinies" that are floating in the palm of her hands are rather unappealing compared to the rest of the picture. As well as this, her ears are quite low on her skull. Well, I'm not one for elf anatomy, but to me they look as if they're resting at her jawline almost.
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:iconalevidel:
pretty!!!!! n___n
exellent color
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:iconjnetrocks:
Thank you so much!
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Fenikkitsune May 29, 2010
Nice pose! Though I do agree with the critique given by !ShuffleStar I think overall it's pretty amazing! I LOVE the way you color stuff! It really brings everything to life in a way I've yet to master!!! :worship:
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:iconjnetrocks:
Thank you! this was a while ago and I think I could have done it much better now, but for back then, I'm proud of it! Oh-My-God. Today my boyfriend and I were doing some house cleaning and I found a disc from high school that has some of my drawings from about 8 years ago. Horrid. hahaha
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Fenikkitsune May 29, 2010
Oh I know how that goes... :paranoid: I've got all my oldest stuff here on dA and boy have I improved since then!!! :faint: It always gives me a little shock when someone faves one of them. :giggle: Some of my older stuff I</a> wouldn't even fave! :lmao:
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Tehenauin Mar 2, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I love the colours, especialy zhe green lights, Its amazing!
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:iconjnetrocks:
Thanks a lot I really appreciate the feedback :)
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death-sanctuary Jan 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
awesome!! very nice work! =3
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:iconjnetrocks:
Thank you so much :)
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GoldAndAPager Jan 29, 2010
fresh
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